Edutainment – Bouteiller’s English Teaching in Hong Kong


Batman – the Dark Knight
October 22, 2008, 3:02 pm
Filed under: * Pop Culture - Film *, 2008-09 S2AC

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1. When batman was driving his car, joker laughed.
2. Some people were talking together while batman jumped down of the building.
3. Batman jumped and broke the glasses of the building so he could fight to the gangsters.
4. Batman has already saved many people since a few years ago.
5. Batman had a lot of fans as he was just like a hero.
6. Batman was brave because he had protected many people and he did not afraid of danger.

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Comment by Kwok Ho Yiu Yoyo 2c 17

1. Rachel Dawes was walking when Henry Dent start to talk.
2. Batman was standing at a side while someone else was arguing.
3. Rachel Dawes was talking to James Jordon so he needed to look at her.
4. Batman started to drive his car since Aaron Eckhart started to chase him.
5. The man was frightened as the joker was pointing the gun at him.
6. Batman took off his clothes because he needs to change his clothes.

Comment by ng woon ting.wendy2c30

1.When Joker was driving a car,Batman followd him.

2.There were a lot of people on the road.While Batman was following Joker.

3.Batman always kills gangsters,so a lot of people believe in and like him.

4.Batman wanted to catch Joker since Joker beginned to kill people.

5.The man was surprised as Joker was sitting beside him and ran away Batman.

6.Batman must catch Joker because Joker has killed a lot of people.

Comment by Taururs Wong2C39

My name is Taurus.I tap more a “r” before.
now is correct.

1.When Joker was driving a car,Batman followd him.

2.There were a lot of people on the road.While Batman was following Joker.

3.Batman always kills gangsters,so a lot of people believe in and like him.

4.Batman wanted to catch Joker since Joker beginned to kill people.

5.The man was surprised as Joker was sitting beside him and ran away Batman.

6.Batman must catch Joker because Joker has killed a lot of people.

Comment by Taurus Wong2C39

1.The gangsters were talking when Batman stood.

2.While Rachel was eating, batman arrived.

3.Batman wanted to go to the building so he broke the glass.

4.As batman loves Rachel, he won’t hurt her.

5.The car exploded because batman cracked into it.

6.Joker laughed since he thought he is clever.

Comment by Chloe 2c29

1.while
The glass broke while the security guards was searching for Batman.
2.when
When Harvey Dent talked ,the citizen were discussing among themselves.
3.so
Harvey Dent lighted the Batman sign so the Batman came.
4.as
People like Batman as he is a hero.
5.because
Joker did not like the man because he did not do the things Jokers wanted.
6.Since
Since Batman wanted to catch the Joker, he follow the Joker

Comment by jeffrey(2c11)

Corrections:

2.While Batman was driving his motorcycle, the passes-by were runningaroung.

3.Joker used a gun and knife to intimidate James so James felt afraid.

4.A lot of people like Batman because he was just like a hero!

5.Batman was a hero as he saved many people.

6.Batman was a hero since he saved a lot of people.

Comment by Law Ching(Nicole)-2C24

Re-Corrections:

2.While Batman was driving his motorcycle, the passes-by were runningaround.

3.Joker used a gun and knife to intimidate James so James felt afraid.

4.A lot of people like Batman because he was just like a hero!

5.Batman was a hero as he saved many people.

6.Batman was a hero since he saved a lot of people.

Comment by Law Ching(Nicole)-2C24

1. Joker was standing on the top of the building when Rachel Danes walked towards him.

2. A reporter shouted while the president was speaking.

3.Two policemen caught James Gordon because they didn’t want him talk to Harvey Dent

4. Joker sat downas James Gordon ordered.

5. Since Brace Waynehit the badmen, the badmen couldn’t aim at him and shoot.

6. Brace Waynehit’s motorbike was strong so the glasses were broken after he collided with them.

Comment by Roger

Correct No.4
4. Joker sat down as James Gordon ordered.

Comment by Roger

Re-Correction
1. Joker was standing on the top of the building when Rachel Danes walked towards him.

2. A reporter shouted while the president was speaking.

3.Two policemen caught James Gordon because they didn’t want him talk to Harvey Dent

4. Joker sat downas James Gordon ordered.

5. Since Brace Wayne hit the badmen, the badmen couldn’t aim at him and shoot.

6. Brace Wayne hit’s motorbike was strong so the glasses were broken after he collided with them.

Comment by Roger

Corrections:
1. When the woman repoter was asking, everybody discussed.

2. While the joker and James were talking, the fire burned.

3. The man answered the questions seriously because everybody was listening.

4. The batman was strong as a superman!

5. Batman became famous since long time ago.

6. Everybody thought batman was a gangsters so everyone wanted to kill him.

Comment by Christy (2c 16)

1.Because
The people think that batman is a great person because he saved many people.
2.As
As batman fought the gangsters,the gangsters used guns to fight back him.
3.Since
Since batman broke the electricity,he could get into the building easily.
4.So
batman broke the glass so he could fight the gangsters.
5.When
When batman was escaping,the gangsters used the gun to attack him.
6.While
While the gangsters was looking for the batman,batman fought the gangsters from the back.

Comment by Jimmy2C40

Correction:
1.(while)
James Gordon walked in while Batman was talking to Harvey Dent.
2.(when)
When Lau was in Hong Kong, James,Harvey and Batman were talking on the top of the building.
3.(because)
Harvey Dent loved Rachel Daves because she was beautiful.
4.(so)
Harvey loved Rachel so he tired to die for her.
5.(as)
Harvey said the joker time will not last for long as he wanted it to pass.
6.(since)
The light supply stopped sine a bullet had fired.

Comment by Elaine 2c35

Corrections:
1.(while)
James Gordon walked in while Batman was talking to Harvey Dent.
2.(when)
When Lau was in Hong Kong, James,Harvey and Batman were talking on the top of the building.
3.(because)
Harvey Dent loved Rachel Daves because she was beautiful.
4.(so)
Harvey loved Rachel so he tired to die for her.
5.(as)
Harvey said the joker time will not last for long as he wanted it to pass.
6.(since)
The light supply stopped sine a bullet had fired.

Comment by Elaine 2c35

1. (When) two children were playing war game by their finger, some fire came out in front of them.
2. (While) the policeman was having a speech, someone was shouting to him.
3. Some people wanted to shoot batman (because) he was fighting with their friends.
4. (Since) Joker was shooting the Batman, the Batman needed to run away.
5. The Joker did some bad things (so) the batman wanted to catch him.
6. Batman won the Joker (as) he had some good weapons.

Comment by WONG HANG TAT

Corrections

1.When two policemen were talking, Batman was standing near them.

2.Joker and James Gordon were talking, while the fire was burning.

3.The president was talking something important, so the people were listen very carefully.

4.The lights were turn off, since Batman jumped out from the building.

5.Batman has many fans as he is a hero.

6.Batman wears a special clothes because he don’t want the people know what is he looks like.

Comment by Fu Man Yu (Amy)

1.when
They were talking when the batman came.

2.while
While they were chatting,the others were drinking beer.

3.So
They felt frightened so they were listening seriously.

4.Since
Since batman defeated joker,he was regarded as a hero.

5.As
People was scared as the joker was going to kill them.

6.Because
Batman regard as a hero because he had defeated joker.

Comment by matthew

Corrections
1.While Rachel and Batman were talking to each other, the Joker came.
2.When Batman wanted to catch him, he was being cauught by a gang of criminals.
3.Since Rachel was his ex-girlfriend as he talked to her.
4.Rachel left him because she had something else to do.
5.Batman was scared so he made a mistake.
6.The Joker is as secret as Batman.

Comment by yeung 2C33

1.When batman came to Hong Kong to take this movie, many Hong Kong people watch the filming.
2.Batman and Superman are very similar because they all help poor people.
3.Batman let Rache Danes as his girlfriend.
4.Batman always jumps from a building to another so i think it is very difficult to take this movie.
5.The movie of Batman started since 1990.But it is also popular nowadays.
6.Batman used his super cars while he was taking action.

Comment by 2c09 Dai Ching Man,Kelly

1.Rache Danes was sitting in a restaurant with her friend when Bruce Wayne walked in.
2.Batman was standing while the other two men were shouting.
3.There was a man who interupted Rache Danes and Batman.
4.Joker was using the gun to point at the man since there was on fire.
5.Batman and Rache Danes caught each other’s hand as they were so sweet.
6.Batman fought to some guys because he knew they were bad.

Comment by PearlyKwong (2c19)

1.when
When they was in Hong Kong, James, Harvey and Batman were talking in the top of the building.

2.while
Joker argued with a man while the money behind them was burning.

3.because
Batman was chasing Joker because he had broken the law.

4.since
Batman became a hero since he caught the guys who broke the law.

5.so
Bruce met the man he knew so they said hello.

6.as
Joker was pointing a gun at James as Joker hated him.

Comment by Kan Wai Chi, Gigi (2C 15)

When- Bruce and a lady came forward to Chris and Rachel WHEN Chris and Rachel were talking.

While- Chris was believing that Batman was taking action WHILE Rachel wasn’t.

Because- James asked the two man to go out BECAUSE he wanted to talk with Chris alone.

Since- SINCE the citizens thought Bat man was out law, Chris explained to them.

So- The baddies did bad things, SO the Batman tried to safe the citizens.

As- James was nice as Rachel said so.

Comment by Janice wOng

1.While batman was talking to Harvey Dent, the joker came in.
2.When Harvey Dent talked about batman, he saw batmen.
3.Many people admired batman because he was a hero.
4.Batman wanted to catch joker so he follow him.
5.Bruce Wayne caught the gangsters as a responsibility of batman.
6.Since Bruce Wayne became batman, he did his job well.

Comment by Chan Tsz Kei -2C(2)

1.When
When joker came to the party, everyone in the party were scare.
2.Since
Since Batman saved many people’s life, he became a hero.
3.So
Joker was a bad guy so Batman want to kill him.
4.As
Batman was justice as a policeman.
5.While
While the people lived stability, joker was planning to planning a project.
6.Because
Joker want Batman to die because Batman always obstructed his project.

Comment by Cathy(2c.22)

1.While Rachel was eating,Brace arrived.
2.Joker laughed because he caught a people.
3.Batman broke the glass of the building as he can go into the building easily.
4.Since Joker did something bad,batman want to catch him.
5.Batman always help people so he is famous.
6.When two man came,Joker and James were talking.

Comment by Grace(2c08)

When
1. When Batman saw a garbage bin blocking the alley, he exploded it to make a way.

While
2. While the guards was trying to shoot at Batman, Batman suddenly hid.

So
3. A guard could not see Batman in the dark so Batman could attack him from a short distance.

Because
4. The guy who talked with Joker wanted to get away from the strong men because they were bringing him to be the food of the hungry dogs.

As
5. As Batman stopped the electricity supply, he could enter the building without being recorded or known by the police quickly.

Since
6. Batman needed to know the situation since he must safe the public and catch the Joker.

Comment by Johnny

While James Gordon was taking to Batman, a man came in.
When Joker was taking to the gangster,two other men came and dragged him away.
As the blonde hair man came,they stopped to talk.
The other two subordinates went away since the blonde hair man did not want to talk to the boss with anybody.
Joker followed Batman because he wanted to kill Batman.
Batman jumped from the top of building, so he can break into the office.

Comment by TAM CHAU WING

-while
James Jordon walked toward to Rachel Daves ,while she was talking to Batman.
-when
When there was a fire, the joker was talking to Batman.
-so
Batman had saved the world so everyone loved him.
-because
Batman chased after the joker because Batman wanted to catch the joker.
-since
Batman jumpt over the building since he climbed at the top of the building.
-as
Batman could do everythings for Rachel Daves as he loved Rachel Daves so much.

Comment by Kelly 2C 3

1.When Batman is riding on his motorbike,the car exploded.
2.While Joker talked to Gagsters,the money was burning.
3.Brace Wayne wears the Batman clothes so nobody knows whose.
4.Harvey Dent as a mayor,he needed to preserve the safety of Gothan City.
5.Batman was chasing Joker because Joker ran away.
6.Since Joker appears at Gotham City,it becomes confused.

Comment by Sharon 2C 12 (.u.)

corrections:
1.When Alfred was tailing to Batman,Batman changed cloths.
2.While Batman was jumping of the building,the guards are patroling in the building.
3.Batman wanted to catch Joker so he followed Joker.
4.Batman started to catch Joker since Batman saw Joker.
5.Batman broke into International Finance Centre
as he wanted to fight to bad guys.
6.Batman wanted to catch Joker because he wanted to safe the world.

Comment by Ricky Lam(2c_21)

1.When Joker was running away, Batman chased after him.
2.While Lau was talking on the phone, Batman jumped off the building.
3.Joker was trying to run away so Batman chased after him.
4.Joker is clever as Batman.
5.Joker always laughed at Batman because he was crazy.
6.Since Batman removed the garbage bin which was blocking his way, he was able to pass through afterwards.

Comment by MiKE 2C28

1.Batman talked with Rachel Dawes when he saw Chris.
2.A woman shouted loudly while Batman was speaking something else.
3.Batman wanted to find Jocker so he used many times to find him.
4.Batman broke the glasses because he fought with the badguys.
5.People was frighted as the Joker pointef the gun to the Batman and killed him.
6.Batman’s motorbike was quick, since his glass were broken after he hit with them.

Comment by Katrina (2C 25)

1.When
When Batman and Rache were talking, they saw Chris.

2.While
Chris was turning off the light while Rache talked to Batman.

3.So
Batman stopped the electrical supply so he could entered the building easily

4.Because
Batman wanted to kill Joker because Joker broke the law.

5.As
Joker could do everythings to kill Betman as he hated Batman a lot.

6.Since
Since Joker broke the law, Batman fought with him.

Comment by Chipan (2c 04)

1. When Batman drove a motorbike, the joker was talking too somebody.
2. The Lau shot a gun while Batman was fighting with someone.
3. The people do not like Batman because he always fights with people.
4. The people stop working since Batman went into a building.
5. Batman felt angry as the joker.
6. Batman felt the joker is bad so he want to catch him.

Comment by Lee Wun Yin 2C (26)

1. The batman drived a bike to catch Joker so Joker ran fleed.

2. When Henry Dent stood on the stage, everyone listening to his speech.

3. Batman got hurt because the Joker hit him.

4.Chris talked while batman wore his shirt.

5.Everyone loved batman as he save the world.

6. batman becomes a hero since a few years ago.

Comment by kwokjoey

1.When
When someone were arguing,Batman left.
2.While
While Bruce was looking at the street,Rachel walked to him.
3.So
The man with long hair didn’t work for Joker so Joker hit him.
4.Because
Because Batman broke into the building,people were pointing their guns at him.
5.As
Joker was laughing as Batman tried to arrest Joker.
6.Since
Since Joker broke the law,Batman was trying to catch him.

Comment by kiko2C

1.While the robber rob the bank, a bank staff took the gun and shoot them.
2.When the man shot the robber,Joker also killed the robber.
3.Batman wanted to catch Joker so he used much time to catch him.
4.Batman hit Joker since Jker has been policeman caught.
5.Joker felt happy as he was killing people.
6.Batman finally could catch Joker because enil cannot win over justine.

Comment by ngan hiu fung

1.When Batman was fighting, the others tried to shoot him.
2.Things were all broken while Batman drove.
3.Batman knew that joker was a gangster so he wanted to catch him.
4.Joker was a gangster since many years ago.
5.Batman is as charming as spiderman.
6.People wanted to kill Batman because they thought that he was a gangster.

Comment by Wong Hiu Fu 2c (36)

1. (While)
While Harvey Dent was talking with James Gordon, Batman disappeared in darkness.
2. (When)
When the children were playing with their hands, the place in front of them exploded.
3. (Because)
It was sure that there had enough seats in the restaurant because Bruce Wayne was the boss.
4. (So)
Joker wanted to kill Harvey Dent so Harvey Dent felt very scared.
5. (As)
People hated Batman as he was the cause of why Joker killed a lot of people.
6. (Since)
Batman drove his motorbike since he was fighting with the Joker.

Comment by Susana Chin

1.
Someone were talking when they stay at the building.
2.
Batman spoil all the things while he was driving.
3.
Batman caught Joker because Joker was bad.
4.
Batman stared drive his car since Joker stared to chase him.
5.
The man did’t help Joker so Joker fight him.
6.
Batman was fighting man as superman.

Comment by Florence Tsang 2c ,34

1.While some gangsters was talking , Batman jumped down and fought with them.
2.When Batman was driving , Joker drove his car and charged Batman.
3.Batman couldn’t identify Joker because Joker always did some evil things liked killed people.
4.Joker did evil things so Batman needed to stop him.
5.Joker did not like Batman since Batman caught him and opposed him.
6.Batman didn’t think much of him as a hero.

Comment by Chow Kin Fung 2C07

corrections”
1.When
When batman (sat), the man who (was) talking to him stand.
2.While
(While) batman was thinking about somethings ,
his girlfriend came to him.
3.So
(The) night was too dark ,so the guards (couldn’t) see Batman clearly.
4.As
The reporters as an audience to listening to what Batman (said).
5.Because
(Batman) ’s girlfriend felt happy because she found her friend in the party.
6.Since
(Since )batman had gone to the building ,almost of the electronic supply of the building was cut.

before corrections”
1.When
When batman sits , the man who is talking to him stand.
2.While
While batman was thinking about somethings ,
his girlfriend came to him
3.So
the night is too dark ,so the guards can’t see batman clearly.
4.As
the reporters as an audience to listening to what batman says
5.Because
Batman ’s girlfriend felt happy because she found her friend in the party.
6.Since
since batman has gone to the building ,almost of the electronic supply of the building is cut.

Comment by KAREN LIU 2c 27

1.When
When two guys argued, Batman was looking at them.
2.While
While batman was coming, some guys were finding him.
3.So
Batman fighted the bad guys so they lost.
4.As
Batmans motor car decided as a bat.
5.Because
Batman felt disapoint because his lover followed a bad guy.
6.Since
Batman became upsad since his lover followed a bay guy.

Comment by 2C01 Jacky

1.When
When the Joker wanted to rob the bank, Batman came.
2.While
Batman jumped into the office while two men were having a meeting.
3.So
Batman was a hero so many people loved him very much.
4.As
The people thought Batman was a hero as he saved many people.
5.Because
Joker wanted to rob the bank because he wanted to have more money.
6.Since
Batman was a hero since he saved the world.

Comment by yuk 2A18




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