Edutainment – Bouteiller’s English Teaching in Hong Kong


Poem Writing assignment
April 17, 2008, 10:12 am
Filed under: * Poems & Songs - Music *, S.2CD 2007-08, School Annoucement

Poem writing instructions

All S.2 students are expected to read through the poems and write your own in the comment section below before 8am on April 21 (Mon).

*Read the poetry guilines, the examples before writing.

** 3 poems in 3 different patterns; submit here.


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I cant open it.
Can u use miscosoft work?

Comment by shirley

i also can’t open it. Could you use Microsoft please?

Comment by KEN

PDF file
no problem at school

Comment by Nikki Bouteiller

Is it I write the poem on the blog?

Yes. 🙂 (Mrs. Bouteiller)

Comment by Denis

Sorry, Mrs Bouteiller. As I cannot open the file at home :-(, could you please type the poems on your blog?

Comment by B0W!E:)

Black, a colour which makes me feel sad,
is the colour of the trees.
Grey, a colour which brings me to a scary place ,
is the colour of the water.
Hey, man! Can you tell why do you hate them so much?
It is because of the personal affairs
or you are teared by something?

Comment by KEN

Sister, is the person who always plays with me.
Mother, is the person who always cares about me.
Father, is the person who always teaches me.
A family, is the place where our love is placed.
The earth, is the place where cares and love are produced every second.
Guys! Let’s us fill it with love!

Comment by KEN

Dogs is a kind of animals, which are very active.
Cats is also a kind of animals, which are very cool and quiet. Sometimes are also can be very scary.

Dear readers,
then
do you know
what is the meaning of “Rain dogs and cats” ?
English can be very interesting…… If you are not only
see its face.

Comment by KEN

1. mother
loving, esteem
cares, loves, prepares
love, cherish, joy, value
dear.

2. eating
gobble, swallow
filling up your stomach
sweet, ice-cream and potato chips
love snack!

3. student always ignore it
teacher just correct it
homework
i hate that stuff !

Comment by alex

1.Levis,
fashion brand
T-shirts,jeans,shoes
beautiful,comfortable,colourful,famous
wounderful!

2.Brother,
retarded,crazy
shut up your month
be serious!

3.Players always having competition
I watch the match
NBA
I love this game!

Comment by DaNnY

1. Dog
brave, cute
naughty, happy, skip
lively, loyalty, optimistic, funny
friend

2. Swimming
a healthy sport
make our body become good
everybody are love it too
swimming!

3. My home is warm in it
people are form in it
Mum& Dad
I love the stuff !

Comment by Arthur

Sun,
shining brighly
brightly, brightly, brightly
shine to my heart
warmly

Long jump,
jumping to sand,
write the record please,
break a new record, oh my god!
grate jump!

Dogs always bike for it
cats always take for it
Love
I like animals!

Comment by Harry

1.
Baby,
joyful,cute
exploring ,climbing,learning
brave,young,vitvlity,eace
Brother

2.
Travelling
Moving forward
Air blending,dispersing,fresh
Flowers living,trees smiling,lovely
Love nature

3.
I always recall for it
Others may just forget about it
Childhood
I care that stuff

Comment by B0W!E:)

Friend
Loving, caring
Sad go away!
I love my friends
Friends.

Dancing
A activity
Popping, breaking, Jazz
Exciting, interesting and happy
Cool!

When you are down
Someone will around
Friends
I love my friends.

Comment by moon

1
Dog
Active, friendly
run, play, bark
Happy, joyful, funny, brave
Dog.

2
Drawing
Interesting, fun
Beautiful, colorful
Draw and color on the paper
pictures

3
People will play in it
Others will stay in it
Home
I love that stuff

Comment by jenna

Water
valuable,beneficial
dropping,flowing,destroying
glad,pleasant,frightened,horrible
Flood

Lemon
Taste sour,feel cool
Drink,dessert,remove grease
Fragrant,fresh,brilliant,freshen
Perfect!

I really cherish it
Others always wish for it
Harmonious family
I love that stuff

Comment by Jing

1. Friends
cares, supports, reminds
love, hopeful, releived, passion
partner

2. Dancing
Jumping highly
Listening to beats, rocks
Legs stepping, hands waving, repeats
Enjoy

3. Someone hate to go in it
Someone wish to go in it
school
I love that stuff

Comment by Grammy

1.Family
support,love
help,hope,care
pay,paid,play,faith
Family

2.Lebron James
strong,skillful
shot,lay,pass
Very Good

3.Noodles
tasting,smelling
eating,chewing,gobbling
Good Tasting

Comment by Denis

1.Light
naughty,powerful
free,shine,quite
warm,hope,kind,smile
Angel

2.Study
difficult job
easy and comfortand task
hard,umdrum but full of unknown
Enjoy!

3.Everyone need it
You can’t leave it
Money
I hate that stuff

Comment by Michelle

1.flowers
beautiful things
soft, well smell
Fall in love

2.Bliue sky
beautiful thing
charming,pretty,happy
I like

3.Many people want to keep it
opposit to weep of it
I want happy

Comment by Ella

1. Friends.
kind, supportive,
play and laugh,
free and comfortable together
friends

2. Reading,
helps us to learn,
it’s where the knowledge from
and where the lonliness gone
Read more

3. People may lay on it,
People may say they need it,
Bed
I love that stuff.

Comment by Connie

Lovers always burning it
Hospital always earning it
Heart
I like that stuff

Nobody like to loose it
Your hands will choose it
Money
I like that stuff

Blind person can see it
Dark sky like to seem it
Black
I hate that stuff

Comment by CatffanY

1.
Music
boundless, carefree
play, relish, create
elated, inspired, stressless, enjoyable
Greatest!

2.
My Love
Doraemon
With tender, compassion, ideas
Many magical inventions
Love him!

3.
Some like taking for it
Some hide from it
Camera
I love that stuff!

Comment by da!sy

people who need it drink it
people who want it think it
water
i like that stuff

cartoon
happy funny
watching thinking hoping
funny amause enjoy lovely
cartoon

sleeping
relex enjoy
wanting resting loving
comfort happy lovely passion
love rest

Comment by SUM

1.Movie
funny,relax
enjoy and happy,
sad,scared,faithful,surprise,
love it?

2Table tennis
healthy,happy
to pristise your arm
make you healthy
enjoy it!

3 television
video,sound
give us entertainment
make us relax and happy
do you like it?

Comment by keith

1.
Friends
Friend,close
caring,sharing,talking
happy,joyful,fun,forever
Friends

2.
Typhoon
He is naughty
Rubbish go away now
I don’t know why you are so rude
How come!

3.
People can write and play it
Singers have the right to sing it
Lovely song
I like that stuff!

Comment by Angel

1.
Doraemon
special, kind
love, help, happy
hopeful, unforget, ft=unny, cute
Ding Dong
2.
Apple,
A healthy fruit,
Eat more, and won’t be sick,
It is not harmful but tasty,
Eat it
3.
I hate it
and, I hit it
rubber
I hate that stuff

Comment by Jason

1)
Autumn
my favourite
the cool wind and warm sun
best time for us to go hiking
love it

2)
Water
is important
that colourless liquid
is what we need for every day
drink it

3)
Blue sky
so beautiful
with the white clouds up there
what you feel when you look at it
is peace

Comment by Fiona

1.
shopping
buy all the things you like
satisfied happy excited
uncontrolled crazy free bankruptcy
money

2.
weather
different kinds
hot wet sunny
cool dry cold fog
unsettle

3.
emotion
very complicated
cheerless,sadness,hopeless
joyful,carefree,merry,annoyed
changeable

Comment by Yvonne:)

1)Sun flower
Lovable, pretty
hoping, smiling, awaiting
Felicity, elation, joy, amity
Sister

2)Dancing
Jumping softly
Hair waving, perspiring, pleasant
Rhythm moving, skipping, smiling, satisfied
Lovin dance

3)People always bawl for it
Others may be scared of it
Death
I hate that stuff

Comment by Vincy

Fascinating poems!

We have Doraemon. Will we have Keroro? Giroro? Tamama? 😉

Comment by Nikki Bouteiller

1.Park
BIG,LARGE,GRANT
RUNNING,JUMPING,SMILING
HAPPY,INTERESTING,PEACE,JOY
PARK
2.Smiling
being happy
sunny,sweet,joyful,peaceful
wonderful,fantastic,amazing,loving
love smiling
3.Everyone joy for it
others may peace for it
born
l love that stuff

Comment by erica

1. flower
lovely, pretty
fluttering flying shinking
peace sweet simple lively
child
2. sun shine
happy smile
boys and girls go to swim
it’s cool ,exciting, and healthy!
great shine
3. people excited for it
people worried for it
money
I hate that stuff

Comment by christy :)

life
valuable,rare
protect,treasure,enjoy
love,chance,hope,free
property

singing
listening songs
learn more english
enjoy it and sing it louder please
do it

how many time you spend on it
how many efforts you spend on it
exam
i hate that stuff

Comment by kik0:D

1. flower
lovely, pretty
fluttering flying shinking
peace sweet simple lively
child
2. sun shine
happy smile
boys and girls go to swim
it’s cool ,exciting, and healthy!
great shine
3. people excited for it
people worried for it
money
I hate that stuff

Comment by christy :)

Brother
hating,disgusting
fighting,killing,hitting
bad,hate,rude,evil
Brother

Sister
fat,evil
eats,drinks,cooks
horrible,terrible,crazy
Big guy sister

Car
expensive,fast
races,sells,buys
big.steely,strong
let’s race

Comment by leo

1)Teacher
kind,nice
teach,love,care
enjoy,happy,good,hard
Teacher
2)Running
make you healthy
you will feel breath hardly
but it can make your heart healthy
enjoy
3)Children love it
Adults not care it
Toy
I love that stuff

Comment by Jenny

1. Teacher
Care, lovable
Nice, kind, generous
Attached, joy, esteem, value
Teacher

2. Talking
Waste energy
The tongue the month the throat
Less talking can save energy
So clever

3 .People are hate it
But People want to eat it
Amazed
I hate snake

Comment by kit@2c

1.ice-cream
cold,good
fantastic,snake,summer
sweet,fat,cup,ice
I love it
2.computer
work,play
happy,joyful,tried
good,useful,internet,homework
It is a useful thing
3.sister
good,kind
beautiful,hopeful,helpful
thin,quiet,friendly,joyful
My family loves her

Comment by wesley

1.Parents
considerate, merciful
cares,tolerates,forgives
touching,love,impressive,bliss
Honey

2.Happy
forget sorrow
everyone laugh lightly
everyone smile happily
Guffaw!

3.someone may look for it
but they can’t book for it
time
I love that stuff

Comment by CCK

1. Milk Shake
sweet,coloyrful
shaking,stirring,licking
refreshing,happy lovely ,comfortable
Angel
2. Dancing
Feeling so good
beautiful shoes ang dress
Jumping ups and downs,never ends
Love it
3.Students alawys tight for it
Parents just don’t feel right about it,
TV Games

Comment by Bonnie

1. Milk Shake
sweet,coloyrful
shaking,stirring,licking
refreshing,happy lovely ,comfortable
Angel
2. Dancing
Feeling so good
beautiful shoes ang dress
Jumping ups and downs,never ends
Love it
3.Students alawys tight for it
Parents just don’t feel right about it,
TV Games
I love that stuff.

Comment by Bonnie

1. Bed
soft,big
sleep,dream,rest,
free,mild,spacious,comfortable
Bed
2. Laughing
very happy
unforgettable things
ever remember this moment
We love
3. 2D students sing for it
2D students win by it
“Everyday”
I like that stuff

Comment by Melody

School
care, loving
go, study, play
joy, love, fun, cool
Learn

Lessons
having daily
hard but enjoy the fun
sometimes bored but I love it
Enjoy

Students always escape it
Teachers always chase for it
Homework
I hate that stuff.

Comment by Janice

1.Stars
bright,brilliant
shining,smiling,moving
lovely,cute,joyful,attract
Sirius

2.Singing
feeling crazy
going around and sing
like the free birds flying in sky
eddy

3.Many people used to enchant for that
many people coveted for that
Magic
I love that stuff.

Comment by Secret

1)Friendship
happy,sharing
share,support,assist
aloha,joyful,pleasure,enjoy
buddy

2)Household
blissful,blessed
closes,grieved,desert
commune,genial,lonely,alone
brood

3)Running
feet move faster
enjoy the wind blow me
body very heavy, fall down
tired sport

Comment by Amy

1.Song
sad,happy
sing,listen,feel
peace,love,joy,sadness
Song

2.Homework
daily working
work hard on it or not
learning knowledge,improve idea
love it

3.Young people love it
Adult think slight it
Rock
I love that stuff.

Comment by jerry.\_/.

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is easy to open, we can use [Adobe Reader 8]
to open it

1 dog
cute,small
running,jumping,playing
happy,excited,scared,sad
boy

2 killing
killing people
kill people is very fun
killing you,killing her,is fun
very good

3 Many people catch it
Many people teach it
Cat
I like this stuff.

Comment by Ashley

Friends
who are care you
help you when you need
we can’t lost it

Money
that is can do many thing
we need it in our life
we can’t lost it

Love
which is important in our life
we need it in our life
we need it with our friends
we can’t lost it

Comment by Jessica

1.Stars
Shiny,sharp
Shine,hide,sparkle
Hope,twinkle,wishes,clam
Diamonds

2.Battle
Bullets flying
Heartless killing,bombing
Bloody body,lonely face,tears
Hate war

3.Children always confuse on it
Students just can’t refuse on it
Grammar
I hate that stuff!

Comment by Sherman

1.
Candy
Sweet,cute
Happy,lovely,pretty
Small,fine,delicious,colourful
Snack

2.
Doll
A toy
Cute,lovely,pretty
It is my friend
I always talk to it
Friend

3.
Nobody like to loose it
Your hands will choose it
Money
I like that stuff

Comment by CatffanY

1.Fish
fresh,tasty
swim,swing,peck
lovely,animating,active,friendly
dolphin

2.Singing
joyful and cool
bautiful melody
lyrics representing my heart
happy

3.Teenager like it
Parents fight with it
Computer
I like that stuff

Comment by Karina;)

1.Dictionary
intelligent,helpful
explains,teaches,guides
knowledge,wisdom,mentoring,abundance
Master

2.Bathing
Enjoy relax
Lying and immersing
Hand,feet,body are bubbling
Love it

3.Kids always enjoy it
Parents often avoid it
McDonald’s
I like that stuff

Comment by LISKA

Dream
Pleasing, fancy
Everything is perfect
Every one want that
Doraemon

Sleeping
Breathing softly
Maybe sometimes have a nice dream
Also may be have a unforgettable,horrible dream
Unknown dream

How wonderful of it
How terrible of it
Dream
I expect that stuff

Comment by Channy

There is some mistake of my poem and I want to change:
perfeact–>perfect

Comment by Channy

nature
lively,wonderful
fun,beautiful,peace
fresh,comfortable,natural,unique

swimming
relax,free
breathing in and out
swim along the swimming pool freely
enjoy it!

very interesting if you love it
very exciting if you solve it
mathematic
I like that stuff

Comment by natalie

1
stella
helpful,lovely
kind,believe,love,
trust,happy,care,support
firend

2
water
useful in everyday
pure,clear,cute,lovely
always need it,cannot lack it
water

3
HKers Pray for it
the poor pray for it
money
I love that stuff

Comment by karen

1.friends
together,forever
supportive,generous,friendly
cuddly,appropriate,valuable,beneficial
friendship
2.flying
feel free
amazingly styles that’s have
worldwide unique features i can see
enjoy the flight
3.When i am sleeping in winter
warm just sleeping in my bed
I love that stuff
When i am getting up in winter
cold just leaving my bed
I hate that stuff

Comment by KATRINA 2D(1) :]

1. Stitch
enchanting,amusing
run,jump,cachinnate
laughable,joyful,attract,refreshing
clown

2. Exam
makes me nervous
chinese,science,geography
mathematics,chinese history
die-hard

3. Many people wear it
Many people care about it
T-shirt
I like that stuff.

Comment by Serena*

Ipod
small,popular
play,pause
colourful,beautiful,apple,charming
gadget

NDSL
famous,well-known
press,push
light,R4,memory card,Cooking MAMA
gadget

Mobile
newest,latest
buy,sell
USB,brand,wallpaper,SMS
gadget

Comment by Mary

Donut
sweet,mini
delicious,appetizing,pleasant
cute,pretty,lovely,happy
Donut 😉
——————
Dreaming
dreaming on clouds
dreaming for my own life
dreaming for eating and playing
Wake up!
——————
people always sleep on it
usually many teddies on it
Bed
I love that stuff

Comment by Cathy-)

1.e
Prince
brilliant,dignified
command,lad,protect
courageous,justice,rightful,handsome
king

2.
battle
destroy homeland
people grieved and upset
but we should forgive all sadness
new day!

3.
human being always care about it
but they seldom share with it
money
I love that stuff

Comment by Marco fish

1.magazine
useful,unbelieveable
many new things
that you can know
women

2.rain
wet,dry
make vegetables destroy
we are very serious
farmer

3.Careless
very dangerous
make us angry
but also very laughly
Myself

Comment by Marco

1/classroom
loving, learning
listen, tidying, study
happy, enjoy, great, nice
care

2/park
children playing
smile on the swing
laughing, running
happy

3/They loving me
i can feel warm here
my family
i love it!

Comment by natalie

nature
lively,wonderful
fun,beautiful,peace
fresh,comfortable,natural,unique
mother

swimming
relax,free
breathing in and out
swim along the swimming pool freely
enjoy it!

very interesting if you love it
very exciting if you solve it
mathematic
I like that stuff

Comment by natalie

1)Car,
free,naughty,
travel,go,fly,
a loving Fast speed
child!

2)Running
freely happy,
legs keeping run and run,
you feel very fast and free but tried
lovely!

3)You like using that to call your friend,
You may fall in danger and call the Police,
Phone,
I love that stuff.

Comment by bryan

1.Cat
cool,quiet
sleeping,eating,playing
indolent,animate,cheerful,happy
lover

2.Dancing
moving bodies
enjoyable,freedom
waving,shaking,jumping,freezing
my love

3.People can not lake for it
nothing can do without it
light
I love that stuff

Comment by coco

1.computer
helpful,knowledge
playing,finding,searching
beautiful,,valuable,usful,colourful
people
2.dancing
become health
make fun with friends
we dance together and have competition
love dance
3.many adult bid for it
many childen buy for it
clothes
I like that stuff

Comment by phoebe

Pen
useful,common
writes,plays,revolves
multicolored,cheap,expensive,all-purpose
Teacher

Water
Breathing hardly
Healthy colorless drink
Breast stroke,free style,butterfly stroke
Treasure

I always draw what I could on it
Materials like wood is used to make it
Paper
I like that stuff

Comment by Maggie:'>

Music
dulcet,vibrate
hope,encourage,wish
comfortable,charming,attractive,lovely melody

Dance
gracious,incentive
cavort,brandish,wiggled
joyful,refresh,powerful,rave dance step

artists’ concert must have it
but some of them can’t faultlessly show it
in case
i love it

Comment by Tiffany

1
Fashion
glamorous, edgy
visualizes, transforms, impresses
fancy, passion, happy, pride
style

2
Singing
Vocal warm-up
Proper breathing technique
Vibrato, scat singing, yodel
Good song

3
Many people always enjoy having it
People with allergy get annoyed with it
Cologne
I like that stuff

Comment by Joel

1. Tulip
Gentle, sweet
Protect, guides,trust
Hardworking, mild, kind,
2. My friends
Trusting each other
No sad, no arguing, no fighting
There are faith and believing on us.
Love us

3. People always jealous for it
Other always competes for it.
Money
I love that stuff

Comment by Persephone

summer i hate it
hot and wet
unconfortable
i hate it

spring i love
cool and good
i love it

mother i love
father i love
they are good

Comment by ting@@

1.
Book
joyous,loquacious
interesting,exciting,touching
give me knowledge
Friend

2.
Reading
Time is spending
Enjoy story inside
It make me happy and power
Joyful

3.
Someone designed it
Others cards signed for it
Clothes
I like that stuff

Comment by Eleanor

1.Songs
classic,romantic
write,sing,praise
memorable,impressive,imaginary,emotional
Grand.

2.forest
animals,plants
mighty creator’s work
lively monkey climbing on trees
save these!

3.Teachers always giving it
Students always throwing it
Homework
Which I am now doing.

Comment by Michael

– -i can’t open it.
sorry about that

Comment by ting@@

1.)Father
loving, esteem
cares, loves, prepares
love, cherish, joy, value
dear.

2.)Dancing
become health
make fun with friends
we dance together and have competition
love dance

3.)Many people wear it
Many people care about it
T-shirt
I like that stuff.

Comment by Candy

1.Plum
delicious,sweet
take,get,eat
seed,tree,flower,soil
Li
2.Autumn
cool,windy
BBQ,Picnic,fly the kate
yollew,brown,red,blue
Chau
3.Swallow
free,fast
black,white,red
nest,house,friendy,tree
Yin

Comment by Shirley

Adults always enjoy it
Children often avoid it
Vegetable
I like that stuff

Comment by Paphael

Adults always enjoy it
Children often avoid it
Vegetable
I like that stuff

Comment by Raphael

1.
Cakes
everyone’s favourite dessert
delicious sweet soft
buy it and taste it

2.
Apples
different kinds
green yellow red
sweet sour big small
cheap

3.
Teachers always create it
Children often do it
Homework
I like that stuff

Comment by Stella

School
Leaning,happy
faithful,joyful
Learning with classmates happily
Testing with classmates sadly
Do you enjoy it?

Plane
Flying,travelling
Interesting and exciting
It can bring you everywhere
but you should pay
Do you like it?

Book
Boiling,interesting
Learning sadly or happily
It would give you knowledge
but it would make you boring
Enjoy it?

Comment by Kathy

WaTeR
WaTeR…WaTeR…WaTeR…WaTeR
CleAR WaTeR….SwEET WaTeR….
IMporTANT WaTeR…IMporTANT WaTeR
Do U want WaTeR?
DrinK iT IS HEalthy…

Comment by WaTeR

1.Love,
exciting,interesting
Fall in love happily
It would make you dizzy,
also it will make you crazy
in love ?

2.yourself
love yourself now
don’t do silly things …
be love and care of yourself
always!~

3.Lovers always hope this
broken heart people avoid this
True love
I like this stuff

Comment by Jenifa




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